BRR - Better Render Results

I might be at the right way.
After som great tips from people, the slingshot finlay seams to fit in the picture.
Thers a few thing that could be better.
Tell me what you think I shall se what I can do.

Also I have removed the white templates at the base of the slingshot, and the track marks ate the walls.
What remains is the stative I leand on.

By the way… the tracking and som other things looks funky. That’s because the clip is so hard compressed.

  1. Mikael Andersson

    Thursday, February 19, 2009 - 18:47:25

    Hello mister Lindbom.
    That’s a great improvement, at a first glance I really can’t see anything wrong with the slingshot. Awesome. Really like the reflections and specular going on now.
    I was looking at your double, and I’m not sure but maybe his pants are a bit too dark? They stand out a bit while you’re in flight and hanging up there. And when he falls there’s a few frames just before you hit ground and turn into the real you where your arms are pretty dark and pops into your real arms with more bounce lights on them. Again I only see this when I scroll frame by frame, it goes so fast that I can’t see it in a normal playback.
    Again, I’m no expert and I might be wrong. Just thought I should mention it.

    Keep it up dude!

  2. efeilo-6

    Thursday, February 19, 2009 - 20:04:38

    Thanks Mikeal! All kind of aspects are welcome.
    I will keep thoes in mind when I go thrue all my moments for tweeking.
    May the sun shine upon you!

  3. Chrille

    Monday, February 23, 2009 - 11:15:32

    Darwin award candidate for sure.
    Nice job btw ;)

    /Chrille

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